Making paper planes
Today I made a weird looking paper plane on accident. Because I was just folding parts of the paper, Then suddenly I folded a side then threw it and it didin't go far. it looked awesome! I new I had to show my parents and I did, and they said "cool". So I tested it out for the second time. It flew terribly wrong, because I think it had to much weight on the wings. because I folded the wing like a billion times because I wanted to make it small to it could fly far. Because everyone says the smaller the faster.
Great going Nathan. Some of the best inventions in the world started off as accidents. As everyone one knows I love folding paper but I am no good at making paper planes. I would just like you to check your punctuation and how you start your sentences. Try not to start a sentence with "because" or "then". If you could re-read your sentences and just make sure they make sense. I know what you were trying to say but the way you have written it is not quite right. With a few little tweaks it will make it more enjoyable for everyone to read.
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